is modern life just (haiku)

there is something about writing haiku that gives a particular satisfaction — some of mine are looser than others, I’m not sure any of mine follow the strictest Japanese rules on content, but tis is one I enjoy quite a bit and think does have some of the cutting technique in the end

a blind catch in the sun

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is modern life just
the entrapment of innocence
still winds blow, clouds dress

A. H / K. H-H (17th November 2018 and 28th June 2019)

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