my honeybee path this hive entranced waggle-dance bee friends may follow A. H (27th April 2020 & v2 18th April 2021)
A slight rewrite not just a reblog this time. The original is here – https://ablindcatchinthesun.com/2020/05/03/poetry-a-haiku/
I did try a bigger rewrite, switching 1st and third lines and changing words and syntax a little, but it lost some charm. And may gain it being put back but with myself owning it more.