Poetry

wind carried words

Posted by Toni on 
I was thinking about old poems that I never felt got to where they could, or never satisfied me somehow, and how it is wrong to assume they never will or will never have bits used elsewhere - and that reminded me how it is also wrong of me to assume that any of my poems are finished really.

wind carried words
fall from the tree
twig scatter patterns
never complete
shape emerges
tongued on a breeze

(c) A. H / K. H-H (11th November 2018)

edit 13/11/18 – today I prefer:

shapes emerge
tongued by breeze

3 Comments Add yours

  1. Toni says:
    27th Apr 2021 at 11:07 am

    Reblogged this on a blind catch in the sun and commented:

    glad to find this one today, i always wonder about pairing it with Author Credit – https://ablindcatchinthesun.com/2021/03/27/author-credit-2/

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  3. Toni says:
    14th Nov 2018 at 3:59 pm

    thanks for these likes, the first clocked me up to my 500th like, so thank you 🙂

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